This week we are learning how to comment on blogs. We are going to answer this sticky question today to practise commenting.
We have to be positive, thoughtful and helpful.
We have to write it like a letter and we must remember to write our name at the end.
How would you answer this question? And remember to tell us why.
Hi Im Laney from Saint Mary's school in room 5.
ReplyDeleteI think the first most important job is a police because it stops people from crashing. the second one is a firefighter because it puts out fires in people's houses. The third one is ambulance because they save peoples lives.
From Laney.
Kia ora Laney,
DeleteGosh you finished this quickly! Well done for using Dictation on your Chromebook to do so.
from Mrs Torrie
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Deletehello my name is Frankie from St Mary's School
ReplyDeleteI think the most important jobs is a firetruck because they can help you when you have a fire and police because they can stop people when people are coming into your house and they aren't allowed to. Also I think that that ambulance are also important because they can help you in a rescue .
From Frankie at St Mary's School in room 5.
Kia ora Frankie,
DeleteI agree about these jobs being important. Where would we be without them?
from Mrs Torrie
Hi I am Charlotte at St Mary's in Gisborne,
ReplyDeleteI think the three most important jobs are a police officer that help people when people are being naughty. The paramedic to help the people that are hurts and save peoples lives. And firefighters to help people when they're are in fires.
from Charlotte.
Kia ora Charlotte,
Deletedo you know any Paramedics? I think they have a really important job too.
from Mrs Torrie
kia my name is Maycee from room 5
ReplyDeletethe three important jobs in the world is a nurse they help sick people I also think builders because they build house that keep us the happy and safe and police because they get naughty people
from Maycee.
Kia ora Maycee,
DeleteI have a friend who is a nurse and I think she does a very important job working in the hospital. Do you know anyone who is a nurse?
from MRs Torrie
Kia ora my name is Alayna from Room 5 at St Mary's
ReplyDeleteMy three important jobs in the world are planters because planters can keep plants healthy and not thirsty. I think vets so if animals get infected they can help them and doctors so no one gets hurt and infected
From Alayna
Kia ora Alayna,
DeleteI think vets have an important job too. I wonder how they learn to be a vet?
from Mrs Torrie
Kia ora Alayna,
DeleteI think you are right - those are 3 super important jobs!
From Mum
Hello my name is James from Room 5 at St Mary's.
ReplyDeleteI think the most important jobs in the world is fireman policeman and doctor because fireman get people out of car crashes, policemen stop people from speeding and breaking into places and doctors help you stay alive and scan you.
From James
Kia ora James,
DeleteI agree with you that these 3 are really important jobs. I wonder how you train to do these jobs?
from Mrs Torrie
hello i am Juniper from st marys school. the 3 important jobs are ambulance because they can save your life when you're really sick.
ReplyDeletethe next important job is an police because they can save your life when you're in danger from dangerous people.
the last important job is fire people because they can save your life when there's a fire.
From Juniper
Kia ora Juniper,
DeleteI wonder how you learn to be a paramedic and work in ambulances? Do you know anyone who does this job?
from Mrs Torrie
Hi room 5,I am Jethro from room 5!
ReplyDeleteI think the most important jobs in the world are:Hospa,electricity and to be kind.why:Hospa:to help peep's who are going to diy.electricity:to help us yous heps of man-made tec.kind:you no why don't you?
from Jethro at st mary's school in room 5.
Kia ora Jethro,
DeleteI think the people who work in a Hospice do have a very important job looking after really ill people. Thank you for adding this to our list in Room 5.
from Mrs Torrie
Hello my name is Arla from room 5 in St marys school.
ReplyDeleteI think the most important jobs in the world are the police force because they keep us safe from robbers,Fire men and women help us in fires and lots of other things that might hurt us and lastly NASA because they keep us safe from big asteroids that could hit earth.
From Arla at st Marys .
Kia ora Arla,
Deletethank you for adding NASA to our Room 5 list of important jobs. I wonder how they find asteroids and track them?
from Mrs Torrie
hello my name is Kylah from room 5 at St Mary's School
ReplyDeleteI think the most important jobs are police caregivers and Firemane because I think police can get all the bad guys and I think all the caregivers can look after old people and firemen can get you out of a fire.
from Kylah
Kia ora Kylah,
Deletethank you for adding caregivers to the Room 5 list of important jobs. We need workers to look after our elderly folk who need help everyday.
from Mrs Torrie
kia ora my name is Nehoa from St Marys in room 5. he most important job is a a firefighter and police. These are important because firefighters can save people in fires and police can help people and arrest the robbers
ReplyDeleteFrom Nehoa
Kia ora Nehoa,
DeleteI think lots of Room 5 students picked these jobs too. And they are really important in keeping us safe.
from Mrs Torrie
hello I am Isaac from St Marys school. The 3 important jobs are an ambulance because they can help you if you get hurt. The next important job is a firetruck because fire trucks can put your house out if your house is on fire. The last important job is police because they can catch bad guys.
ReplyDeleteFrom Isaac
Kia ora Isaac,
DeleteI think pots of other Room 5 students picked these jobs too. Would you like to one of these jobs?
from Mrs Torrie
hello I'm someone from 5 St Mary school
ReplyDeletewhen is the most important jobs is to be a firefighter because Bayside houses
from Summer
Kia ora Summer,
Deletewhat a shame we didn't replace the words you had already as I know you had done lots of writing.
Do you know any firefighters? I wonder how they learn to be one?
from Mrs Torrie
Hello my name is Cyrus from Room 5 in St Mary's School
ReplyDeletethe thee most important jobs are policeman because they get bad guys.
from Cyrus
Kia ora Cyrus,
DeleteLots of others listed policemen too.
Next time yo might not ned to delete all the words to make it correct. Maybe only one or two words need to be replaced. Let me show you next week how to do that.
from MRs Torrie
hello my name is Ruby at St Mary's School at Gisborne in room 5. The three most important jobs in the world are firefighters because they save people's lives from fires. Police are importance because they get the bad guys. The final one is the the hospital workers because they saved people's lives.
ReplyDeleteFrom Ruby
Kia ora Ruby,
Deletethere are lots of jobs in a hospital! And yes - I agree, they are all important.
from Mrs Torrie
Kia ora Havish,
ReplyDeleteLots of Room 5 students listed the Police like you did. They do a very important job in our community.
Next time please wait for the teachers to read your work before clicking "Publish".
from Mrs Torrie
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ReplyDeleteHola
ReplyDeleteI am Aimie from Saint Marys school
I think the three most important jobs are Teaching because you have to do everything that a good teacher should do and also you have to work hard.
2cd important thing is a cop because they catch bad people and fight with them.
The 3rd important job is a Nurse or a Doctor because they help people who are sick and give them medicine so that they can heal from there sickness,
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Mā te wā
Aimie
Kia ora Room 5
ReplyDeleteI am Charlie J from St Mary’s School.
I really liked how you added "What are the three most important jobs in the world?" image with a rainbow around it. I don't know what the most important jobs in the world are but I think that a doctor, a nurse and being a parent are the most important jobs to me.
I learnt that this is a sticky question.
Maybe you could change the color of the rainbow to a semicircle and add grass at the bottom to look like its on earth.
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Mā te wā
Charlie
Hello room 5 my name is Arla and I have some more jobs to add to the list of jobs here they are 1st I think that farmers are important because they grow food for us 2nd I think that doctors are important because they look after sick people and lastly builders because they build houses and other things from Arla.
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